the world of torrandels

I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just a little confused.

i wanna give some characters little things about em to make the world seem a bit more alive

Let's hope you can. You and those you work with.

If possible, I think it'd be funny to show those hobbies at a later point as sort of a surprise to the reader.

i dunno if it'll be a book,maybe my own public rp world,or a tabletop,,or a comic

In any case, "reader" applies I think.

sure maybe,but in all cases it differs in usage of the word too.and each is a different experience,therefore delivery of the characters must differ too...

Sure.

soo...

So what?

i dunno

Regroup later?

thinking of a wizard who was kicked from the wizards guild for disobeying the chain of command,and now runs a boat of curios and mystery items.

Sounds like he could be a fun character.

i like making fun characters! :3

Yeah!

i'm thinking it'll be a female,but i don't know whether to make her energetic or mysterious.maybe her personality switches between the two.or she's mostly energetic but can reveal a darker personality at times
still don't have a name or backstory for her,like my previous characters

there's a legend in torrandels some people who die are given power and reincarnated into life by certain gods and become their warriors,however they can be dropped by their deity from this duty or die again and rest in the astral plane like all departed.few find out who they are.and these...champions or whatever,live mostly normal lives,but are called to do things no one else can do by their deities

Neat. Chosen champions.

yes but with great power comes great responsibility,not to mention they are automatically forced into the affairs of the deities,whether they want it or not

what if we made this into a public roleplay?...OMG I JUST HAD AN IDEA!what if the world was relatively small,but spacial rifts exist,and most islands exist in separate seas in different subspaces,and they can be opened at seas by a special coin,and these coins this way all people have a chance to create an island,
or,these portals center around a single PART of torrandels.a unique island chain which is different,and the other areas can be used for roleplaying plots an stuff

I think that sounds kinda cool, but I'm guessing you haven't thought through it too much.

i'd actually love to make my idea into a public roleplay but,..hm..
i don't want it to rip off kaerwyn,which is basically what i wanna get into,and made this whole thing to get into

and,thing is,i dunno if they'd accept my world with it's presence of deities.they aren't TOO big a thing but,they're there if i want to make a story and involve deities.

I say keep the dieties.