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Post by Zain the raptor on Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:08 pm

Ye!

So, my serious feedback is that there could be a bit more explanation of things. Unless it's your stylistic choice to make whacky things like science carrots just happen, in which case embrace the unexplainability. Also, thought it was a little strange the guy decided carrot juice was the right choice of drink.

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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:14 pm

well john is a clueless goof,figures if they made lin's life better it's the perfect drink choice.
and this one was meant to be goofy

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Post by Zain the raptor on Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:24 pm

Okay then. In that case, it started off kind of serious for being a goofy story.

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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:28 pm

well i needed a contrast,

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Post by Zain the raptor on Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:30 pm

Ok. It's just a little confusing to the theme.

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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:53 pm

yeah...well.i'm new to this,i'm no professional,it was my first try.

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Post by Zain the raptor on Fri Jan 15, 2016 11:55 pm

You did good.

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Post by Slot Fox on Sat Jan 16, 2016 12:05 am

yaay

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Post by Zain the raptor on Sat Jan 16, 2016 12:14 pm

What kind of stories do you wanna make?

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Post by Slot Fox on Wed Jan 27, 2016 7:14 pm

any i guess,

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Post by Slot Fox on Wed Jan 27, 2016 9:24 pm

hm.

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Wed Jan 27, 2016 9:26 pm

Hm?
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Post by Slot Fox on Wed Jan 27, 2016 9:34 pm

slow day in the transformation section...

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Wed Jan 27, 2016 9:36 pm

Yup.
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Post by Slot Fox on Wed Jan 27, 2016 11:23 pm

*sigh*

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Wed Jan 27, 2016 11:25 pm

*pat*
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Post by Slot Fox on Sat Feb 13, 2016 1:27 pm

yeah...

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Sat Feb 13, 2016 1:30 pm

You ok?
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Post by Slot Fox on Sat Feb 13, 2016 1:40 pm

...not right now...

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Sat Feb 13, 2016 1:40 pm

Why not?
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Post by Slot Fox on Sat Feb 13, 2016 2:01 pm

i dunno...

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Sat Feb 13, 2016 2:02 pm

*huggle*
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Post by Slot Fox on Sat Feb 13, 2016 2:14 pm

*hugs,sighs*

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Post by Zain the raptor on Sat Feb 13, 2016 2:22 pm

Hey, we're here fur ya.

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Post by Slot Fox on Sun Feb 14, 2016 5:07 pm

*in my lonely transformation corner*

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