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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 6:43 pm

*in a robe with a pipe on a rocking chair in a study*behold transformative literature like never before!
i shall post any transformation stories i write up.yes i take requests!


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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Fri Jan 15, 2016 6:54 pm

..... should I be here? Last I checked we weren't supposed to comment on others posts here.
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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 7:00 pm

you can i don't mind,

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Fri Jan 15, 2016 7:06 pm

Oh, okay then.
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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 7:42 pm

HOPeful thinking, rabbit transformation, requested by zain.

the door slammed close.lin had returned from her appointment, having had trouble with her kidneys these past few days.she was in an automobile accident,having just earned her driver's license on her 17th birthday.she went a little nuts that day..luckily it seemed no one was harmed,but lin had damaged her left kidney in the accident,until she could find a donor,her doctor recommended a low protein diet, "lin,i told you to be responsible,you had to accept that race challenge didn't you?" said her father with a sigh, lin's father was a botanist and genetic researcher,waiting for his big scientific breakthrough.
"please dad,don't remind me.,,,i need some rest" replied lin,storming to her room,
after a pass of two months,lin was videochatting to her boyfriend john in her room "still no donor opening... i wish there was one..."lin sighed,she hadn't had any of her favorite foods in 2 months, she would KILL for a burger about now.
"well not like a miracle could happen,doesn't stop me hoping for ya to find something."replied john.
"EUREKA!I'VE DONE IT!"exclaimed lin's father "excuse me,my dad's got something up.gotta go"lin ended the chat and walked down to the basement"what's wrong dad?"
"quite the opposite my dear! i've made a miracle!"replied her father,he gleefully grabbed what was sitting on the counter,to lin's father,it was revolutionary,a miracle,a thing of beauty, ONE THING THAT COULD POSSIBLY CHANGE THE WORLD!
lin,in awe,could only utter three,simple words...
"....a carrot.really?"
to be continued
(taking a small break here)

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Fri Jan 15, 2016 7:47 pm

*imagines this as a be archive arc*
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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 8:02 pm

hm?

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Fri Jan 15, 2016 8:04 pm

Nothing.
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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:30 pm

(now to continue)
lin's dad was shocked."a carrot?not just a carrot! this is for you my dear,i'm growing these for you!it not only will help your medical condition,but also,it will boost all your senses and athletic prowess!" lin's dad replied.
"well...i guess it won't hurt to try"lin said nervously,taking the orange vegetable,she bit into it and was in awe.
it tasted outstanding! like nothing before! "woah..."lin said in awe,ieating more.
lin's father smiled,he had made a revolutionary creation,"just don't take ore than two a day dear..." he said nervously, "yeah sure dad"lin said,taking another chomp into the carrot.
several months later,lin was relaxing at her house with john"your dad is some guy...he created that stuff all for you,heck,you're the most popular kid in school  lately!"he said,smiling at her.
"yeah,it's great,i've never felt better"replied lin,"hey,i gotta take the dog out to the yard,mind fixing something to drink while i do that?won't take long."
"no problem,i got this!"said john,with a smug grin on his face.
"ok,we got soda,oj,milk,...hm...maybe i should make carrot juice!"john said,surely his charming thought will only end well.he thought,he pulled out lin's special carrots and the juicer,soon,john learned the carrot's don't give much juice"hm...it'll take the whole bunch for one cup!...well,it's for her.she'll love my kindness!"john proceeded to juice every single carrot,then set the juice down where lin would be sitting,
lin walked in,"jeez how much can one dog eat?"she said,holding mr. flupsiliddle her chihuahua.she then set him down and sat down.
"oj huh?thanks!"lin proceeded to drink the carrot juice,"huh,.tastes off,,oh well."
"it's carrot juice,it took every carrot in your fridge!"
lin practically choked on the last drops of it,and swallowed"what?!"
lin's stomach was practically roaring,"oof..."she looked down and saw white and gray hairs slowly cover her stomach"what the heck...?!"lin said shocked,the hair started covering her whole body,her teeth slowly changed,her front teeth growing longer,her face pushed forward and her nose changed into that of a rabbit's,suddenly her ears started to point,they slowly migrated to the top of her head,pointing straight up,like a rabbit,her nails changed into claws,and padding emerged on her fluffy rabbit hands.as her bones cracked and popped to more suit her new body,a little cottony tail grew from her end,her flip-flops were getting tighter until they snapped off as her feet elongated and morphed into something more fitting of a,..well,lagomorph!
as her changes slowed and finished,she stood up slowly
"ugh,,,,you buffoon!"lin yelled,then sighed,she hugged john"oh you didn't mean it,,," john was shocked"lin,i'm so sorry..."
lin"i'm not hopping mad,but please,tell me before you mess with my dad's stuff,i should know,the rocket car was a doozy"
john laughed"you're a funny bunny y'know?"
lin sighed"don't make me make you a rabbit too,,,wait no carrots,..."
the night ended with laughter,
the morning started with a worried father."no more miracles for you if you can't have self control,i only hope i can turn you back!"he said
lin sighed"well.it's not that bad at least.hehe,"lin said,nibbling on a single carrot

THE END.
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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:35 pm

You need to work on the ending a bit.
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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:37 pm

enjoyed?this was only the start of a wonderful journey with even more stories if you liked!
really?i thought it was good.
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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:38 pm

It seemed a bit lack luster compared to the build up.
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Post by Zain the raptor on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:40 pm

Lol, funny. Razz
Bit of strange character logic. (and you can live with one kidney) But that doesn't really matter. good job. owo

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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:47 pm

i would have ended it with john  eating an experimental ham sandwich after.and ending it with him going "that's all folks!"with lin's dad chasing him.
i know you can live with one kidney,but i felt it would be better developed if lin's father would be the kind of person that not only would rather fix his family's problems himself,but would also try to fix anything for his precious daughter.
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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:49 pm

.... this might be better as comics.
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Post by Zain the raptor on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:49 pm

D'aww. ^w^

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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:53 pm

yeah

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Post by Zain the raptor on Fri Jan 15, 2016 9:55 pm

So they're healing/sense-heightening carrots that have the side effect of making you a bunneh.

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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:15 pm

only if you take too many,

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Post by Zain the raptor on Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:16 pm

What if you take half of too many?

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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:27 pm

more than 2 per day is too many so i dunno.

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Post by Zain the raptor on Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:33 pm

So, if you ate 2.1 you'd be a bunn? I'm just nitpicking btw, don't take me seriously.

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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:35 pm

lol.don't overquestion it.

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Post by Slot Fox on Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:56 pm

was it good enugh for me to make more?

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Post by Model-Omega-Tyler on Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:57 pm

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